The last line was certainly a surprising twist...

Haha!

An excellent take on the sentence, sounds quite IC :) The last sentence is excellent, provides the humorous perspective and saves the piece from getting too sentimental.

Quite a good 221b, the form isn't forced, and the subject is one we don't often see taken up, in this manner and in this form :)

LOL... brave girl, I wouldn't be anyone's double with kiddknappers at hand, especially with Holmes guaranteeing safety, (it will all only end in tears :)
Just discovered this series and LOVE it, thank you.

Intriguing.

Progressing nicely:-)

Mrs P:-)

This is interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Brave girl!

I look forward to reading what happens next.

And happy birthday Rockztar!

Mrs P:-)

A lovely birthday gift, a promising story line. Look forward to the rest of this adventure

And this leaves me totally confused...

Interesting take on original canon - Assume the person she's speaking to is Holmes, despite the pre-decease issues.

A very neat duet of scenes,

Sad, and very well done,

Mrs P:-)

Mrs P is right! Lovely. O like your author's note too - great that that's in rhyme too.

Nicely written. So few words to convey such huge emotions and to set a complete scene. We know exactly what is going on - with the exception of one small thing, in my case, who's Hopkins?