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| Reviews for ZEVIE ABC one shot |
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   NekoHikaruTakeshi 12/21/12 . chapter 18how come this is the same with questions? but anyway its still good |
| AMrocks21 12/18/12 . chapter 18 Cute! |
| Dis-Iz-Da-Lyfe 12/18/12 . chapter 18 Hey, I really like these! But you have A LOT of errors, maybe you could get a beta? It would make it easier to read :) |
| XxMockingjay'sliveineveryoneXx 11/26/12 . chapter 17 Couple grammar mistakes but cute nonetheless. |
| XxMockingjay'sliveineveryoneXx 11/16/12 . chapter 16 I like the stories but you have a lot of grammar and punctuation mistakes. |
| Guest 10/17/12 . chapter 16 awsome i luv this maybe u could do quiet or quiz for Q srry if my ideas suck |
| AMrocks 10/13/12 . chapter 16 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW that was so sweet |
| HatersGoing2Hate 10/11/12 . chapter 5 Actually it's from fresh price of bell air but I can see how u though that. |
| Guest 10/9/12 . chapter 5 it is from that life alert comercial |
| AllyouneedisLove49887 10/11/12 . chapter 1 A lot of your sentences are run ons, so a little more punctuation would help :) Also, besides the run on sentences, you have a tendency to abbreviate things, which is a total NO-NO. Not trying to be rude AT ALL, but if you have dreams of being a professional writer, if you abbreviated anything other in a text format you'd be fired right then and there. This story isn't bad at all, I actually think it's pretty good. This was just constructive critiscm and I'm not trying to make you feel bad at all :) -Keep writing! Xoxo, Grace 3 P.S.: If you want to contact me, PM me or contact me on Twitter if you have one at Love_Forever_13. |
| AMrocks 10/8/12 . chapter 15 OHHHH so sweet! Zevie came in my life for a reason and that too make me smile, and your story does the same! Update soon! |
| thepandarawrs 9/26/12 . chapter 14 The story is so cuuute! I know it's annoying that I said that last two words but it's so cute and this is like my daily dose of Zevie so here are some for O: Octopus Ocean You don't have to use them. They're just some small ideas. Good luck! |
| thepandarawrs 9/25/12 . chapter 13 I LOVE THIS! I NEED MOREEE! Here are some for n: New Noodles Noble Neon Good luck! Hope we can see a new chapter soon! |
| thepandarawrs 9/24/12 . chapter 12 Can u make the next word Monkey? |
| A 9/21/12 . chapter 9 Please continue! This one-shots always make me want to smile or laugh. They definitely make my day. |
