More? Please! Because it's so good and I want more!

I watched this movie last night and thought that the character of Max needed to be explored more. I like the fact that you replaced Hilary Swank's character with Danica, someone who is eager to discover the reasons behind why Max is the way he is. Also, I'm glad that you gave him and August a little bit of a back story. Did it feel like August was simply "there" in the movie, wasting the abilities of the wonderful Christopher Lee? It did for me, but you've changed that. I feel like you've added depth to the original story and I think that the original screenplay should have been more like this. Thank you! Please finish this, I dying to read more! :)

Please update soon! I love your story!

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YOU UPDATED! I'M SO PROUD!

Update again soon, I NEED to know what happens next.

OMG!
I am in LOVE with this timid Max, SOOOO adorable.
Update as soon as you can, I don't think I can wait long for the 3rd part.
UPDATE!

Oh I really like this! I know it's been a long time but could you add another :)

Riveting story and yes, I've always wondered. Thanks for writing and I can't wait for more. Please finish the story

Really loved that first chapter, it captures the characters very, very well - please continue :-)

I have been WAITING for a good fanfic of this movie!
Wow, amazing so far.
Poor Max! He's so sad, and now I'm sad.
Does she really know that he's watching them?

Update again soon, can't wait for the next chapter!