This is a total character study of Esther, I am amazed how you have brought her motivations and personality alive in such a short amount of facts. Well done. Yes well done.

A.E.J.

Beautiful. You revealed so much about Esther in few words. 4 and 5 were my favorite secrets.

Amazing; it's really clear that you put a lot of thought into this incredibly believable portrayal of Esther. I found 2 and 3 particularly intriguing; and also liked how you showed the difference between Allan's and Mr. Jarndyce's kindness.

This is quite good. A great look at Esther.