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Supernova Dragon Cat 5/21/13 . chapter 1Where do I even begin with this...Let's see... Suffice it say, I love love LOVE this story. You write beautifully and beyond that you've managed to capture these characters effortlessly through your thoroughness and attention to detail. I love Sandor's wild side! The moment when he pins her to the ground and tells her how badly he wants her. Oh my goodness! I was blushing like a maiden. And of course, her crushed crown of daisies. Loved that imagery! You've struck a great balance between the slow burn (they're not jumping each other's bones just yet) and hot moments of affection. I love all the stolen kisses and inner dialogue that follows. I applaud the fact that Sansa didn't just run away with Sandor to one of the Free Cities. Although my heart was saying "Giiiirrrrlll, you go with yo' man" I knew that her leaving would have been uncharacteristic for Sansa. She's a good girl and she misses her fam. I absolutely adore how you've portrayed her; so much sweet innocence, but her time with the Hound has seemed to open her eyes. Wonderful job. Please keep up the great work, Miss Maroucia ;) |
BloodofDurin 5/20/13 . chapter 13This is a wonderful story! Your writing is well structured and refreshing to read, and I can't help hoping that our favorite pairing will survive to the end! I look forward to the next chapter very much! Best wishes, BloodofDurin x |
ashleybean1 5/14/13 . chapter 13Great story! I just read the whole thing, and I was impressed by quite a few things, the first being that you are a very gifted writer. I am assuming that you're relatively young, considering that you mentioned school. Had you not mentioned that, I would have guessed you were much older, as your prose is very fleshed out, especially your use of concrete imagery. I also enjoyed the plot devices. I have a soft spot for fics that reintroduce Sansa to her family. You may choose the Professor George route and do them in, but I'm glad it happened. I also very much appreciate a slow burner; yes, please! My favorite thing of all, though, is your characterization. I don't believe I've read a fic yet that had those two remain so close to cannon. Sansa is still the silly child most of the time, and Sandor is the inarticulate killer still contemplating rape, but the key is that they begin to grow in subtle ways as influenced by each other. You create that fine line very well! They have only been together a short time, after all. Sansa isn't going to change into a mature woman overnight, and Sandor is not going to start spouting love songs in the moonlight, so thanks for doing them justice! I eagerly await your next update! |
Moa in the Moon 5/10/13 . chapter 9I've been reading and I just realized that I haven't stopped to leave you a single comment. The ending to this chapter was just- you know- too much. So many feels to be had over it. I am loving this story, but already I am beginning to panic over the fact that there are only four chapters left- gah! |
PunkyBrewster20 5/8/13 . chapter 13Arggh! Update update update! I'm on pens and needless here! Lol great story, I'm very enraptured by it! |
Kazza 5/3/13 . chapter 3Oh what a story! I love it. I especially like how Sandor says so much with so few words |
Moran442 5/2/13 . chapter 13I can't wait to see how she convinces her mother to let him stay...should be interesting! |
Bloodsired 4/30/13 . chapter 13You had me worried there I thought they will part ways already because it seems there is no way Sansa will convince her mother when Blackfish shows up, its good Sandor insist to escort Sansa up to Riverrun. Now, that Sandor will stay for four days I hope Sansa will convince her mother and Rob. |
Midnightdawn67 4/29/13 . chapter 13Le sigh. I needed to read something full-on awesome like this after watching the debacle of what they are doing to the Hound/Sandor's character arc on HBO's Game of Thrones series. So thanks for another great update! Crossing fingers for these next four days together to change things for the better...for both of them. |
Weirdcatlady 4/29/13 . chapter 13I'm so happy Sansa is finally back with her family. I just want to point out a small thing though. Hoster Tully is the Blackfish brother, not father. |
K.E.Degz 4/29/13 . chapter 13Awww, Sansa feels... I have to say I really don't like SanSan stuff, even if it is believable. This is VERY believable, and I love your writing style. The love that Sansa has for the Hound is believable...I just think it's icky because she's, like, a baby. :P |
AngelOfDeath6 4/15/13 . chapter 12Noooooooo, Sansa please go with him argh |
Bloodsired 4/15/13 . chapter 12Love the angst, just when I think Sansa choose to be with Sandor she choose to consider other option that wouldn't result to rash descision. I think its for the better though. |
Blue Sky Rage 4/15/13 . chapter 12Thank you for updating! I love this story and this new chapter was perfect! |
crushnotsosecret 4/15/13 . chapter 12even when i thought that sandor was coming to strong on her, i would hope that she realized how much it took for sandor to exposed himself like that. i had to stop him but should have hold him close so he hadn't feel rejected. great chapter, but... you are going to make us suffer, right? just like GRRM? please, get them together... |