| Reviews for The Stories That Bind Us |
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hollowgirl15 5/1/13 . chapter 16PLEASE make it a two-shot! I would love to see a second part to this. It's wonderful and beautifully written. You seriously have such a way with words. I love reading your words. Please keep writing the words. They are nice. |
velveteen habit 5/1/13 . chapter 16Ah, what a tease! Really tense, but great imagery. I loved this, and am really looking forward to you continuing all of your work soon. Yay! |
Druuu 4/30/13 . chapter 16Beautiful imagery! I look forward to the next installment, and I also can't wait for you to update your other stuff. You are definitely missed around here! |
ilovecrimedramas 4/30/13 . chapter 16Some heavy stuff, but good writing! Update soon! |
Fierce Queen 4/30/13 . chapter 16Wow! You are amazing. I love how for these one-shots we really don't know what's completely going on until the end. You do a great job with keeping the surroundings ambiguous while giving us tons of detail about what's happening between the two characters. Love that Peter doesn't abandon Neal, even if it means he gets hurt as well. I'd love to see another part to this, but it's also great on its own. Wonderful job! Blessings, Fierce |
Miss MaryAnn 4/30/13 . chapter 16I like very much but I'll like it even better when you get them home safely. Pretty please, she |
miss-tarletone 4/30/13 . chapter 16Very well written! Lovely symbolism, too. |
adoptarescue 4/30/13 . chapter 16I just love the dynamic that you have between Peter and Neal. It is so on target ! |
wotumba1 4/30/13 . chapter 16intense! |
anon 4/30/13 . chapter 16 *whimper* that last part. with the orphan baby/rich man analogy. so powerful. at a time when white collar isnt there and the bond tugs at your heart strings oh so nostalgically. oh peter 3 brilliant job :) |
pechika 4/30/13 . chapter 16Wow pls give us a sequel |
5-STAR 4/29/13 . chapter 16Loved it Peter was awesome |
miss-tarletone 3/28/13 . chapter 15This was very sweet! Great job! |
Daniella74xo 3/27/13 . chapter 15Aaah i LOVED this! Soo cute! Such a creative idea:)) Adorable! These stories are the best! Really really hope there will be more! I love them! You are seriously such a talented writer. I love your word choice and vivid imagery, and the plot lines are always creative :) Thanks for sharing! Hope to hear more! |
Daniella74xo 3/27/13 . chapter 7Aww love it! It's so true. This could be in an episode. Neal really is a part of their family and i really believe that what you, well techincally Neal lol, said is true. He probobly does do certain uncoventional things for the FBI because he knows Peter will always "reel him back in" and vice versa. This was just too cute. You portrayed the character really well:) Ugh i hate Kramer lol. Anyway, great job! I love these stories:) |