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| Reviews for Effloresco Secundus |
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   derderxp 10/27/12 . chapter 3Love it! Update soon please :) |
| deathgeonous 10/27/12 . chapter 3 Huh, very interesting and nice fic. And I love the way you avoided doing the bell test. Quite creative. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now. |
| BloodFeud 10/27/12 . chapter 3 I really love this story; I hope you'll have the time to come out with another chapter soon, because I can't wait to see what happens next. Ditto for the Harry Potter X Twilight crossover starring Su Li. Thanks for writing, BloodFeud |
| Guest 10/27/12 . chapter 3 Love love love it! You're awesome! |
| Anonymous 10/27/12 . chapter 3 Your take on tree climbing was very unique and enjoyable to read. I also like the character developments in this chapter. Again, you're clearly setting up the stage for good canon deviation. I love it. I look forwards to reading your next chapter. |
| pinchess07 10/27/12 . chapter 3 kyaa! this is...awesome! kudos! 3 |
| PayNoAttention 10/27/12 . chapter 3 Yay! You updated! I find myself liking This Sakura more and more. |
| Katara-Hatake 10/27/12 . chapter 3 Okay! Really liked this chapter, and it was nice how you made Sak try out a different way into tree-climbing The little team-binding moment was great, I absoltely love Team 7's bind the most. The-one-who-is-plotting K-H P.s.- I agree with you on the HP/Naruto pet peeve, it is extremely childish for authors to do that. |
| Taboo22 10/27/12 . chapter 3 Wonderful story and chapter! |
| JustWriter2 10/27/12 . chapter 3 Are the bijuu magical creatures? The reason that I ask is because I imagined what would have happened if Kakashi hadn't saved her in time and Sakura had let loose some accidental magic in order to stop the needles. It reminded me remarkably of how in Shippuuden, Naruto's tailed form stops projectiles. Naruto's healing factor is also similar to magic. We also haven't figured out yet how or why Hermione was reincarnated with her memories and abilities intact. -jwb- |
| pipper11 10/27/12 . chapter 3 Good chapter, love this storyline. |
| The Unicorn 10/26/12 . chapter 3 Very nice story, I really liked your introductions and Jounin exam, I also found the charactarizations very well done. The week on/week off training seems a bit odd (and if you apply real world rules extremly counter productive) but I assume there's a reason for it. Are you planning on completly skipping the D-rank missions? while the canon missions really make no sense there are plenty of missions that make sense for a 'zero risk' mission to give a team of green genin (emptying and incinirating the wate baskets in the hokage's tower, fetch and carry for the administrative functions in same, rotate emergency stores in the shelters(assuming they exist) keep the lines of fire around the village defenses clear of vegetation, act as junior orderly at the hospital, etc...) |
| bakaisha 10/26/12 . chapter 3 Great story. Loved your interaction between Team 7, especially the introduction bit. Great job with the tree-climbing exercise and in showing their budding team dynamics. I really like the way you are moulding Sakura's and Hermione's personalities together, however I am a little confused about, when did Sakura realized she is Hermione reincarnated. As a fellow crossover lover and writer, I thank you for your different approach to the story. It’s really different than the run of the mill HP/Naruto crossover fics. Update soon. |
| MoonWatersLight 10/26/12 . chapter 3 Awesomeness! PLEASE update soon! :D |
| Selonianth 10/26/12 . chapter 3 male kimono's have pants though, not a long no-leg thing like robes. On that basis they do look more like a dress than a kimono but the akatsuki are a glaring example of robes lol. |
