You soo need to write what Esme did during the fight and then what happens after ( but plr
Ease bring Carlisle home 'alive')

I'm about to cry. ): That was... so beautiful! So beautifully written and... I don't know, the end made me want to cry so hard. D: You are a really great writer, thanks for this one!

Ok. Like I felt it. The breeze and the fear. Imagery was great!

Awwwwwwwwwwwww, that was soooo sad, I almost cried!

that was so bittersweet! I'm sad it has to end that way...

Heartbreakingly lovely. I never understood how Esme could bear to part with Carlisle just before they met the Volturi, or how he could leave her back at the house. I guess they were strong enough in their love to stand apart, knowing they were always together.