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| Reviews for EriSol, Eridan's Final Moments? |
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   Saminagg 5/25/13 . chapter 3Oh my gosh this is both wonderfully silly and adorable at the same time |
| BlackRose556 4/19/13 . chapter 3 SQUEE |
| BlackRose556 4/19/13 . chapter 2 *_* Karkitty...why would you do that to Sollux.. |
| BlackRose556 4/19/13 . chapter 1 OMG |
| JamGoggles 1/27/13 . chapter 3 Wow.*blow from how great this stort is* Wow your a really good author. |
| Deadnotalive 10/14/12 . chapter 3 Wow this is really good! There are a few spelling mistakes here and there but those can be easily fixed or looked over. I actually like how fast paste it is. A lot of other stories are slow and make you wait forever but this is quite good! I look forward to reading more. Have you ever thought of sending these to someone to read over and spell check for you? Or even just copy/pasting onto Microsoft Word and correcting it there? Now for the fangirl part of this review: OMYGOSHOMYGOSH ERIDAN! WHYYY? AND KARKAT! WHAT WERE YOU DOING? SOLLUX YOU SWEETY JUST KEEP LOVING HIM EVERYONE JUST KEEP LOVING EVERYONE AND LONG LIVE HOMESTUCK AND ALL IT'S MAGNIFICENT SHIPS! |
| Guest 10/12/12 . chapter 3 *gasp* OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD! |
| Nadir Vantas-Strider 10/12/12 . chapter 3 Eridan. what are you doing!? |
| Nadir Vantas-Strider 10/9/12 . chapter 2 Please, please, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeease continue! |
| Erisol 9/16/12 . chapter 2 I LOVE THIS...PLEASE WWRIGHT MORE! XD :3 |
| Guest 9/15/12 . chapter 2 It kinda seems like a dream from Eridans view X3 |
| Guest 9/15/12 . chapter 2 WOAH! WOOOAAAAH! KARKAT?! FLUSHING FOR ERIDAN?! YOU'RE OUT OF YOUR MIND! ... I LOOOVE IT! CRAZY PEOPLE ARE AWESOME! |
| Guest 9/15/12 . chapter 2 This Is really Good, but your words are sort of jumbled together and hard to follow, I think that's your only problem, other than that i really like this :D |
| HomestuckVS 9/15/12 . chapter 2 This is interesting. I think the story is moving a little too quickly, but other than that it's a very unique, creative idea. :) Poor Eridan. I also feel pretty bad for Sollux, even though he was pretty rude to his best bro Karkat. :( |
| Tickles 9/15/12 . chapter 2 Whoops i sent it and i wasnt quite finnished...:P 3.) (Continued) i cannot express the importance of them! 4.) Dont rush it. Take your time and smooth it all over. Make sure you get the emotions across before you move on completely! 5.) Write in one voice. The way you write describes the feeling of the story. If you write with simple vocabulary and words that protray happiness, it'll be hard to express sad or tense scenes. 6.) Also, the more details and dialouge you add *without rushing!* the longer the chapters will be and the easier the story will be to read. I hope these tips helped! I would really like to see more of this story, and its improvement! _ |
