This was very good. The characterization was spot on, and it read almost like a flashback on the show. There should be flashbacks like this on the show! I like the way that you portrayed both of them, and the early relationship between the two. The concern Walter has for Jesse's performance and what be troubling him is really spot on. Really great read! I wish there was more!

I liked this! I think you captured Walter perfectly! I would of loved to read Jesse say "bitch" a couple times in this though. :)

A friend of mine recently tried to become an English teacher, but it didn't work out. When he came back to town and told us about it, he said that, ironically, it was his problem students he would miss the most. Even though they disrupted class and were disrespectful, for some reason it was those students he felt most connected to. I see a little of that in Walt here. He especially hates to see potential to go waste.

Pretty damn good, especially the last 5-6 lines. Really captures the early relationship of walt and jesse, and shows a bit of the potential.

I really liked this. Poor Jesse :( I think that kid's had a hard life even before his partnership with Walt. *snuggles Jesse* I love how Walt has that pull towards Jesse, even back then, but doesn't quite know how to articulate it.

This is very good. You captured (early) Jesse and Walt's characters perfectly here.

Good characterization. This is something I could definitely see taking place some time in the past. Incredibly well-written, as well. This is going into my favorites. Keep up the good work! There aren't nearly enough BB stories out there.

Great! I'd love to see this scene as a flashback on the show!