You have a GREAT take on their voices. I can HEAR your dialogue. Nice work :)

Please write more. More! You're really good at this.

Now, this is SWEET! Like how they're in character and feeling natural. Well done. :D

I have to say yours is the 1st Melissa and Joey fanfic that i've read and truly enjoyed. Its truly amazing the way you made everything right but still cute. I just started watching the series and so far I think Mel and Joe are so meant for each other. This work was a joy to read, WELL DONE!

Great story! You pegged their characters just right! The other stories are so dumb and corny, and right out "I love you." Let's get real, as much as we wish that to happen, it's not gonna be RIGHT OUT THERE. I call for a sequel! Please keep writing for Melissa & Joey!

Liv Snigglebottom

Lol oh so sweet. I could see this scenario playing out :)

Loved t! This was so in character you captured the banter between Mel & Joe perfectly. I hope you contnue to write more Mel & Joe fanfics.

Very cute :) Loved it! Very nicely done and in character!

Amazing. I love how you make the characters actually sound like something the real Mel and Joe would say. Other fanfics say things like omg i love you..i love you too..and let's be honest.. Mel and Joe will probably never just admit out of the blue that they love each other p Please keep writing ! I love your fanfics of Melissa and joey )

Just when I was worrying you would not write another of your magical fic, you show up! The only good thing I like about the last episodes is that Mel has finally acknowledge (to herself, and that's something) her feellings for Joe.

That was amazing.

That wa so good! I really want you to write a story that goes just a little farther though! Ou are killing me lol anyway do u when the rest of season 2 continues?

Loved this story!:) Please continue with others!