amazing work! very very good!!



HawkAngel

I can't login because I've reviewed this chapter before, but what happened to chapter 5? I was enjoying the story so much! please PM me!

love it

ARH! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

Nice. Please update soon like the story very much. I read it on . Please update soon.

Lots of Love

sesshoumarufan18

This is a great story and your remakes make it really wonderful!

Your writing has greatly improved from the original. Well, not the writing but the grammar. I like your rewrite, although it still does have a few errors here and there. I don't blame you about the cramps! How all women hate them so... But I still love your story, and yes, you are making things clearer. :) Don't stress yourself out from writing!

amazing i hope u finish it, one of the best fan fictions ive read yet for these couple really...

i really love your story it very beautifull

Aww don't you just love Rin? Doing all of those things out of the goodness of her heart.
I love this story and I really REALLY hope you get chapter 4 out soon!
Just one thing though, I think the grammar/spelling needs checking out in a couple of places. Otherwise, this is a brilliant rewrite and I love it!
PS. I hope you feel better too. :)

Please Update soon! I loved the story! Its a very funny tale on how I found it, but I really did love it! You have to continue. Trust me, your story will get over 174 reviews.

I saw your original story. It was great and gave me a warmth in my Heart :). You need to update the story though so that Sesshomaru has the Bakusaiga and the Tensiega with the Meidou Zangetsuha ability. Plus, daiyoukai not taiyoukai? Please put Sango and Miroku as physically in the story please? You'll have to check on for info on the characters, new characters and dead characters. Like five known characters died (Kikyo, Kagura, Kanna, Hakudoshi, and Akago)!

i love it i cant wait for the next part i think when he dose come back she should have given up on him he should have to work to get her back and i think there should be a nice stemmy seen whith them. sorry bout spelling please write back and tell me what you think and let me know when the next part is up thanks

the first version was one of my favorite sess/rin stories because of how strong rin was. i am looking forward to seeing how you would rewrite it. i hope things are going well and your period isn;t such a pain anymore! update soon!

I love this story! I hope that you get the next chapter soon. The imagery of the story was amazing. I never thought that way about marking a mate for a demon. Keep up the great work!

Cheers,

Talia