Please up date soon I've been waiting forever and I love you fanfic! :3

This is pretty good. Sorta like mine; you can't explain everything in two chapters unless they're huge. Please continue.

please oh please continue this story! Soo interesting i want to see what happens next!

That was amazing please write another im a mavis fan so im begging you

I decided to check out some of your work after you graciously left me a review and I have to say: I'm glad I did. This right here is what fanfiction is all about! Exploring the "what if" scenarios. And you chose quite the scenario indeed. Your story is very well written with a great narrative but what I really like is the plot. Fantastic subject you've chosen here! It's quite an exciting topic to explore and the way you threw in those nice flashbacks really added to the whole idea.

I applaud you for breaking away from the mould, for writing something fresh and interesting and for doing such a great job!

Please, do keep writing this story, its so bloody great. Not enough stories about Natsu x Mavis.

It'll be funny to see the guild's reactions when they get back. I hope you'll find the time to write this in the future.

Well, it really depends on how Mashima will go with this. I mean, Gajeel was blocked too but we didn't see Zeref recognizing him. Still, this is a quite interesting idea. The wonders of fanfiction indeed.

Plzzz. was kinda rare, but it was legen-wait for it-dary!plz...people are begging, just update , if possible,please let them kiss?

I really like your fanfic, it's a shame that there more fics of this couple, I hope you keep doing more chapters, Greetings

Really good, hope you update soon.

you have to continue!

Nice end, and good flashbacks.

It was a great story. I thought of the same sometimes, the idea I mean, Mavis having known Natsu in the past. Of course, the reason for that was the situation of the Fighting Festival arc and his supposed 80 years of age... though, I didn't write about it because that would also include Gajeel and Wendy.

Anyway, the story, even if short, was great! Good to read a NaVis story again and one that's completed! You made my day!

Keep writing one of these days, you have talent.

Saludos.

Wow! A NaVis story!

I really liked it, you made an interesting approach and also settled something of a plot and past history between them. Good, good, good. I enjoyed it.

Though, you should separate the dialogs. I got confused in some parts.

Thanks for the shout-out, but I believe I should thank you! You wrote this story, not me! And several liked it! Success for you!

Now, I'll check the second chapter.

Saludos.

another cute couple please update soon you're very good