I'm guessing this is au with Roisin and Mike together? That may just be my pathetic interpretation :P

I loved it- all the punctuation and usage of bold and italics and the 'because' at the end was really cleverly used, making the important parts stand out and just adding a whole lot more effect to the whole thing.

The repetition of 'I hate you' at the beginning is so tragic and yet beautiful- as is the whole thing and the fact that even after he cheats on her she still can't leave him is how I would imagine it to be (if I'm interpreting this right)

I actually thought it was in character and it was a scene I could almost build up inn my mind, I really loved it :)

-Checky x