Hahahahahahahahaha nuju said suck! xD xD xD that was awesome! Great update and I freaken love this story!

I loved the witty banter in this! I can't stop laughing! XD XD XD Keep it up. I hope Kopaka and the others go easy on these girls.

I used to love Bionicle, then I sort of forgot about it for a while...BUT THIS IS FANTASTIC! X'D I think you killed me. I laughed so much!

I love it. Especially when Pepper hides under the pillow. :D I think at that point, if it were me, I would have just thought 'Heh. They're going to think we're mad anyway. Screw it.' and started screaming about mutant taco-monkeys to no one in particular. :)

Pweedy Pweeze for an update soonz? *adorable pouty face*

What the...? One minute I'm laughing and the next I'm facepalming yet I can't stay mad. This is too funny. I love it! XD

The screaming session had me laughing my head off. But, man those girls are tense!

Great chapter Mazu! Eagerly anticipating the next one!
Continuing on...
2) Impromptu lesson on laughing. Yay.
3) I thought Matoran were all the same height?
4) 'You die.' For some reason I find that hilarious.
8) AHHH! Random and sudden hair color changes! No one equipped to deal with that!
9) Oh god... I hope he can handle it.
12) Kinda hard to take that at face value but sure. I'll roll with it.
13 & 14) Kinda figured that would happen)
16) I say match-stick is Jaller, spike is Pohatu and slick is Lewa.
17) [Amused] Oh boy...
18) Hidden plot. {Le gasp} INCONCEIVABLE!

Heya mazu! it ish me! i am here to review you to death!

1. ASDFGHJKJ! UPDATES!

2. this is amazing! i love the way you took our RP and just brough it to life!

, green tomato-apple fruits! XDDD

4. i love the amount of love and detail put into this!

verbal dylexiaexcuse for bad grammar

please update soon!

Awesome chapter but one thing I noticed that is off. Nuju does not have the Mask of Levitation. He has the Mask of Telekinesis. Toa Lewa is the original wielder of the Mask of Levitation with the other Toa Mata/Nuva getting the same mask powers later as secondary mask powers. The mask power is similar to Toa Inika Nuparu's mask power of Flight but only allowed the user to fly rather than allowing everyone around them to fly.

I LOVE IT!

Why u no update?!

See, I DO have an account!

Apart from a few of the usual typos, this story's excellent! Are you uploading the next chapter or the other peep in the collab?

Wow, this is an awesome story! I've always love these types of stories but this is so unique and cool! I love it!

I will tell you that I've noticed a couple of grammar mistakes. Nothing major, just something you might want to consider telling your beta to wake up and get too work. Lol, kidding :)

I've read the two chapters you have so far, and I have to say, it's pretty cool! I like the concept of a crossover between the human and Bionicle world, so I'm looking forward to an update!