That story is awesome... I know it's almost done, but it is still really good... I am sorry you lost someone dear to you! Good luck with the end of the story!

Alek canNOT die! (My shortest review to date.) I would add lol if I did not realize that I was dead serious. You said yourself chalek do not know how to live without the other.

So I'm an avid TNLOCK fan though too be honest, I had no clue this was the acronym for the show till the last chapter. I would've responded to a chapter earlier in the day had I realized. (The articles don't stick out to me so I mostly refer to the show as 9 Lives OR Chloe King.) while I won't do the fanfic challenge, I'll probably spread the fanfic around to any 9 lives fans I find. Btw, while you say you're ending soon, could you someday restart this plot line up again for THE LONG RUN. I would love it so much and continue following!

While I'm sad to see Amy go I noticed she wasn't part o your plot much anyway. And your reasoning for the chapter made sense. Also while idk if you did it on purpose, the fault in our stars ending kinda could be sympolic of Amy though I was in denial at first, hoping that it didn't symbolize Alek. The song, though morbid, was poetic too. Btw, was also wondering if you're were gonna encounter Jasmine being guilty of putting Zane in their lives by dating him? And isn't he Mai and Alek's brother? I'm guessing you'll go into why Jasmine's not guardian (unless we just don't know). And while I do lovsess over Chalek, I gotta say I would like to see more Jasmine. Oh! And what bout the danger that Meredith was in dating Brian's dad who was involved with the Order and helping them because he believed the Mai killed Brian's mom. Also there was Brian's estranged creepy grandma who was suspicios of Chloe. Is any of that stuff from the show being used or are you mostly going in a whole other direction?

While I love the plots and think the general story direction is fine. I must say that you've got to start getting someone to revise and edit your stuff. I'm even bad with grammar but while I try to read your grammar, I often spend time rereading lines because the grammar is really messed up and the spellings are often for the wrong meaning word. While I end up getting your meanings, could you please consider finding someone to pick up on these simple but irritating mistakes when they occur so often?

Thank you and keep up the writing!

That was a pretty intense chapter. My opinion at least, no matter how short. I really hope you update soon!

I loved this. Honestly I've read this from the beginning and I wish you updated more lol. I will continue reading until the end and I hope you never stop this story. Can't wait for the next chapter c:

So i Just started reading this story today and here i am already waiting for the next update. LOL I really like this story and can't wait to see what comes next!

Ahhhhh! Completely amazing chapter! I cannot wait to see more! :D I also can't wait wait to get our story up!(:

amazing story cant wait for the next update

I LOVE this story! I hate how the show just got canceled after one season. I was hoping for more than 3-4 chapters but I love how Chloe and Alek are so close! Although you might want to touch up on grammar and spelling (no offense). But overall, this is my favorite fan fiction TNLOCK ending!

Okay, well I truly understand how stories can make you frustrated. Happens to me all the time. I've said it before and I'll say it again; this is probably one if my favorite stories on here! I happen to thing you're doing an amazing job! And if you don't update for a while, I get that. Just don't drop the story completely or I may ball my eyes out like a four year old...

I liked this chapter and can't wait until you post the other remaining chapters! :)

Loved it! Update xD

Please continue writing this story you are a amazing writer