You truely are a great author, this deserved WAY more reveiws :D

P.S. Cute! Luv QuoteXCurly

Nice work you're doing there, bud. I really like what you write and I think it is awesome. Keep on going!

JP505

Ah, I remember this happening. Thank god I saved her. 3

I'm glad to see a story where Quote gets Curly out of there. I mean, why didn't he do that in the game? It would've made a lot more sense.

Sweet, new chapters!

Wow, nice first chapter! At the Living Waterway (in the game), there is a notebook in a house that says that the robots shut down if they are exposed underwater for too long. This is so they can prevent short-circuiting. Not sure if robots have lungs, or if they feel the need for air when they are submerged.

Some things to improve this chapter would be to fix up some of the spelling errors. There was only maybe one or two - one was a point where "you're" was used in the place of "your" - but other than that, all of Quote's thoughts felt dead-on believable.

Omg noooo! Curly, wai u do that? D:

Heh, anyway, brilliant chapter as always. :D I sent you the next chapter of our story in case you didn't know. It's your turn to write!

This was somehow so touching! I can't understand why haven't I noticed this fic before now...
Great job!

Eet ees so nice...the robots, they ees so beautiful.

Wow, this is very good! :D

I found about two grammar errors, but otherwise, this is great!
I have to play the game all over again today because I just realized a few days ago that I needed the tow rope to save her. I'm looking forward to this story!

Extremely well written. WE MUST WRITE A COLLAB FIC SOME TIIIIME!