Ya know, I could see this happening in an actual game. Phantom R's SMUG persona totally fits him (and I like the word smug), as does Charlie's no-nonsense one. I really loved this story! (Heck, I love the Phantom R X Charlie pairing in general!) I hope you choose to write more!

*/* this is definitely epic for a Charlie and Raphie fic xD so cute if you ask me same goes with the concept of 'catching who' hahaha man. Honestly, these 2 need more love as Marie and Raphie lolzzz Not much good in giving constructive criticism and for a drabble it gave much an impact to moi' XD ah the joy of Tease nyahahaha so cute!

Very good usage. Love it.

That was very interesting. I really like this story. It was funny.