Loved the whole mentor-relationship you built between the kids and the adults. Never really imagined David and Amanda in that role before, but I think they're doing a pretty good job. ;-)

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Nice inner conflict with Dylan. I liked how you wrote the two sides: his wanting to help Jason and at the same time not really wanting him to get in trouble.

Ariel_of_Narnia

Wow, that was heavy in a very good way. The way you captured Amanda's memories on the subject... that was good.

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