Ha,I can't believe I've never seen this fic!It's awesome and it says Pikachu's a girl!Marvilious!!

I have never really watched pokemon, (how do you make the 'e thingy?). Actually i did watch the pokemon movie once. Mew two was cool, very very cool. and with such ignorance i couldn't tell a flamizard from a poke at you. BUT, i had no trouble following along with your delightful little fic, actually it might be the coolest thing ever even thought of to do with pokemon. I enjoyed the race scene and the bit of fighting later on, and i might like to know what happens next. J00 R kewl \/\/R173R.

Please write more!! I love this story!!!!

Okay! You got me hook line and sinker. I want to know what happens next.... Please. By the way I love this story. A bit fast in the story but still catchy enough to read... :)

Love it! More Ash/Misty and maybe Gary/Whats-her-face. shoot I'm terrible with names.

oooo cliffhanger
write more or else my
birds will come and nibble your head off
MUHAHAHAHAHA... ahem... sorry
good plot so far
hope to see more (i hate abandoned work)

Don't listen to anyone who tells you differently- this is a great story, and I beg you to continue.

Hi, great to see you back!!!! I have been waiting for the rest of this forever, Please hurry with the next chapter!!

I know who Mewtwo is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GARY OAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol Okay i'll calm down. I can actually see Gary getting jelouse of them and then blowing everything to hell because of it... it's all so clear now... @_@

cool story
write more pleeze
:D

I like it, really nice, please do more quickly, just one thing you need to change.

PIKACHU IS A BOY YOU DUMBO!