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| Reviews for Love, Thneeds and Other Shady Business Deals |
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   KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun 5/21/13 . chapter 2Mighty interesting |
| Karianna 10/13/12 . chapter 2 This. Must. Continue. |
| FrittzyCrazy 9/26/12 . chapter 2 Very Nice Job! I like how you added Bartholomew Cubbins to the story. I also like the end- "Whaddaya say? Partners?" Norma stooped to shake the furry creature's paw. "Partners." Please Update Soon! |
| Oncie's Sweetheart 9/25/12 . chapter 2 Hahahahaha! I love Bartholemew's character! And I love The 500 Hats of Bartholemew Cubbins! You read my mind! O-_-O :D:D:D:D:D:D:D UPDATE! OS |
| Waiwa Ayas 9/25/12 . chapter 2 Wow, Bartholomew is hilarious! He's just like my roommate! This is a masterfully done story so far. The descriptions and the dialogue are smooth and never overbearing. Now that Norma is working with the Lorax, I wonder what's going to happen next? |
| Waiwa Ayas 9/25/12 . chapter 1 Oh my gosh, this is awesome! You got the Onceler's character dead-on. I laughed my head off at his and Norma's interaction. Great job! :D |
| SootGremlin-chan 9/25/12 . chapter 2 This is getting good, and I love Barty! He sounds like a very interesting fellow :) |
| Spazzle 9/24/12 . chapter 1 This is great so far! I'm looking forward to more! |
| Guest 9/20/12 . chapter 1 I love it! Norma is so brilliantly stated and Strong I like how you stayed in Character |
| kikki1546 9/20/12 . chapter 1 Very well Done I look forward to read more |
| yorkshiretea 9/18/12 . chapter 1 I LOVE this! Go Norma! I love how you actually got once-ler's character right... You're the first person I've seen to get it right in ages! I also really like how Norma and Once-Ler's characters constrast so violently well; really well written. Keep up the good work! |
| FrittzyCrazy 9/18/12 . chapter 1 Great Job1 I really Like this! PLease Update Soon! I BEG you! |
| Franki09 9/17/12 . chapter 1 It's great so far! The quality of writing is fab, and I like the new take you took on this pair. It's very unique and original and is a nice break from how these stories are ususually written. I look forward to the next chapter! Well done! :) Franki |
| Oncie's Sweetheart 9/17/12 . chapter 1 He was most likely the most attractive man Norma had ever seen. And she despised him with every fibre of her being. She hated him. She hated that smug son of a beehive for being so happy about this. So enthusiastic. So friendly. So likeable. For smiling at the cameras, totally suave and optimistic. But most of all, she hated him for being so dang cute. She made herself a solemn vow then and there. She was going to ruin his life. hahahahahhaha:D best lines here |
