It's definitely humorous and its interesting seeing as you make Tryndamere a more mischievous sort of person

Not bad, not bad. The thing I like most about this pairing is the opposite personalities. The relationship really is fun to read :D.

this shows promise! I like it!

I really like this please finish it :)

Nicelly done. I assume it's hard to launch yourself into this story but, as far as I read the personalities of Ashe and Tryn are realistic. So keep up with it !
I assume you can write down how the genuine barbarian can melt down the Ice queen !

I will follow you :)

Good start ! Continue

Your characters are very detailed and have a lot of depth. I especially like how you portray Ashe's and Tryndamere's relationship. This is the only story where I feel the relationship is well fleshed out. I am dying to read more. Please update soon.

I'm sorry i had to do this but i have read too many fan fictions who somehow forget that the word "clothes" has a fucking E in it. I get it, English is probably not your first language or whatever, but please for the love of the holy void make it stop before i go insane.

completely awesome, i suport the... ehrm... citrus.

I have to say that I really enjoyed the 2nd chapter it was so cute and Tryns rejection of the mining deal was hilarious. More please! I main both of them when I play oddly enough so I am a little attached. I have yet to see a complete story about them so you sir are an awesome person for taking on this endeavor.

Ps . Any chance of Oranges? Who am i kidding? Gosh I'm such a pervert. Lemons?

it was good

it actually was good, i would like to see this completed :D

Lol halarious

It's a little bit choppy, but ithink you've got tryndamere's personality down. I love this story.

D'awwwwwwww :D They are adorable! I love Trynd's personality AND thanks for making Ashe have some fun and not be a total killjoy! Moar!