|Reviews for Farnell's Solilquy|
| meixel 9/21/12 . chapter 1
Very clever indeed. My only thought / suggestion would be that since it is a 'solilquy', you could eliminate the quotes for each line and use only a beginning and end quote for the entire speech. I think it would look more like one man speaking, but read just as well. You produce such fun pieces!
| twojedi2001 9/19/12 . chapter 1
I thought that this was a well-written story based on a very clever premise. I especially liked it each time that Mark "missed" the turn.