To "The lady Terwilliger,...mel_is_"evil"
Saying Mel is "evil" in your name LACKS Intelligence.
Mel is a NICE SWEET guy. You might as well be saying that Lisa is "evil" because she just as much an underdog who STRONGER then she looks as Mel is. Just cause someone is nice, calmer and not a crazy murdering criminal, does NOT make someone evil, you FUCKTARDED, SHITHEADED MEL BASHING ASSHOLE BITCH!! >:( BROCCOLI IS SMARTER THEN A BASHING BIMBO LIKE YOU!! (broccoli has a 10% IQ)
To Writin'Chica2K
I'm Sorry about that but it P*ES ME OFF that LYING A-holes like that "Mel is 'evil'" B*H Bashes Sideshow Mel for RETARDED reasons that LACKS RESEARCH, LOGIC, INTELLIGENCE and even TRUTH. You seem to mean well though.
It was a good try writing Mel but he was out of character. He and Bob are NOT friends because then Mel wouldn't have PROTESTED(with the others) about Bob's parole in "My brother from another series" and Mel doesn't think THAT ill of children. In fact, he seems to like kids more then he lets on.(Bart can be another story sometimes tough)He's not some sort of stuck up snob. As I said, it was a good attempt but try to do a bit more research on the cute bone haired clown sidekick next time, K?

Pretty good

krusty and SSB were in-character for once. nice job ;)

heh. it's cool :)

Please continue! I'm anxious to see how this ends.

Nikita

great! you made my heart beat faster with anticipation! keep it up.

wow...

Wowee. I like, I like. Very well written, and a good topic. Please keep it up. ~Koji~

Amazing

Continue, beofre i kill u :-)

awesome...but weird

This story either begs a sequel or lets the reader's imagination free to come up with how this situation really ends. Wonderfully done.