|Reviews for First Step|
| Kate 12/30/12 . chapter 1
Oh yes hurry up and write the next chapter
| cheska86 10/12/12 . chapter 1
Awesome one-shot! I would love to know what happens next. Maybe you should make this in to few chapters :)
| SurfingCountryGirl2 9/25/12 . chapter 1
interesting take on what will happen
| rookiebluefan89 9/21/12 . chapter 1
I knew this one would turn out great! I really like the style you write in where you insinuate a lot of things and hint things that we get to figure out. This story gives me hope for s4 especially with the Andy/nick friendship because I'd REALLLY like it to stay a friendship. Great job!
| rookieD 9/19/12 . chapter 1
Oooooh! Love it! Totally, this could happen (eerily plausible - bloody swarek being all elusive..bloody Marlo taking up head space room LOL). Well, at least it made me happy that Andy is prepared to work her way back in his books...
Love the way it's written... And I won't be complaining at all if we see what happens NEXT through your eyes ;)
| angelflower28 9/18/12 . chapter 1
ooooh I love it..I wish it wasn't a one shot.
| Guest 9/18/12 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness, that was an amazing chapter. I wish you would go on with it. What happens next? I could totally see season 4 starting like this,
| Jelly Bean Jenna 9/18/12 . chapter 1
Really awesome, I would have loved it to be a 2 shot though!
| deedee920 9/18/12 . chapter 1
Love it! Great job. I have a feeling they are going to do something like this on the show. Jealous Andy would totally not be a bad thing as long as they don't drag it out too long. I love the idea of Sam arresting Andy. I can definitely see Sam giving her the silent treatment, much like in 3.01. Love how even though he's pissed he's still jealous of and going to protect her from that slime-ball.
Favorite lines: "Oh, she's anything but silent."
"Actually, you got too much to lose. And so do I."
| Guest 9/18/12 . chapter 1
Great job. I could see Andy coming back to a big freeze out from Sam, at least at first. And I wouldn't mind seeing Andy do her version of proving she loves him until he says yes. I can't wait to see the Gail/Nick post-UC dynamic as well. A few people on the TWC board mentioned wanting a sequel, and they even have the perfect title 'Second Step.' I'm definitely all in favor of that if the inspiration strikes you.
| CM-x-SN-x-HP-x-roxmysox 9/18/12 . chapter 1
Loved it...I hope you consider continuing it...I think you have an original idea...and would love to read more of it! ;D
| sydcasy 9/18/12 . chapter 1
Loved it, would love to read what happens next :D
| kmart92 9/17/12 . chapter 1
Amazing idea. Sam has every right to be mad and giving her the cold shoulder, but I'm glad she's not giving up. I love how she gonna do everything he talked about doing to get him back, but also that she's willing to wait. Hate the idea of Cruz, but I guess something like that's inevitable. Brilliant story, wish you'd consider continuing it, cos I definitely want more. Publish again soon!
| vixenali 9/17/12 . chapter 1
Very nice one-shot of what could happen when S4 picks up! I keep wondering about how Andy and Nick are going to be pulled out of their op (knowing what's been happening while they're filming it) and how Sam's going to react towards her (even having dreams about it, ugh this show is crazy, lol). I kinda get the feeling that he's going to play it cool since she left him without a word after he was so hopeful. Love her trying to talk to Sam and him just ignoring her. It seems like something that the writers would have happen.
Anytime you want to write one-shots (as the thoughts hit you), please do so! :D This one was very enjoyable to read!
| jenwa85 9/17/12 . chapter 1
i think it's great and you should conitue it instead of having it a one-shot