Why this story has only two reviews so far is something that I don't understand, because as far as stories go on this archive this one is of incredible quality, at least so far as the plot is concerned. The amount of development that you've put into the world is really, really impressive, and the way that you've taken it in more the direction of a crime thriller is something isn't seen very often. It's unique, and I really like it.

The one thing that I would point out is that your description can get a bit on the heavy side in so far as the wording that you choose, but I understand that this is likely a stylistic choice and that there's nothing wrong with that. I just felt I would point it out, as it might come across as a bit much for some readers.

This story has been a roller coaster to read so far, and I'll be eagerly watching for more. Keep up the great work.

I'd like to say that this is an amazing story, and it's a real shame that it hasn't gotten more reviews; it certainly deserves them.

As for the story, I sincerely hope that Spyro manages to save Cynder and their children; two failures in a row can't be good for his psyche.

This is interesting, I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next. I've really liked the vocabulary in this story as reading words like those is... I really don't know how to describe it.

I've also liked the transition of the peaceful, family setting from our two heroes and their children to the mysterious, and yet, sinister dragons seemingly plotting something that's obviously going to be just... evil. It just leaves room for wondering. But then again, one of the genre does say suspense.

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