|Reviews for The Mary Spence story|
| jecollins201 2/18/13 . chapter 25
Love this story and the Trails end story. Would like to see more stories of the Mccullough's family soon.
| Rislanderinks 1/16/13 . chapter 25
I so enjoyed this story! Your characters felt very real. I am sorry Major Adams is gone though. He could have been a wonderful grandfather for the boys. I guess ol' Charlie Wooster will have to fill those shoes now.
I hope you post the sequel soon. I'm jonesing for another good Wagon Train story . . . ;)
Thank you for the entertainment.
| Annie Jones 1/16/13 . chapter 25
I absolutely loved loved loved this story! Im so sad to see it end but glad you promised to revisit this family. Please write more!
| gaben 1/15/13 . chapter 25
A great story and plot idea reagarding both the fate of the Major and Flint exit from the series. I would have liked to think that flint found a home and love and contentment, though with those three boys, contentment may be a little bit of a stretch. I'd like to hear more about Flin't growing family, especially the baby... a girl I hope.
| gaben 1/15/13 . chapter 24
They so desrved that. Fire is a killer. Its a winder the rest of the Wagon train didn't have them skinned alive.
| Guest 1/14/13 . chapter 25
you are a good story teller, you have to write more soon. please.
| Guest 1/13/13 . chapter 25
Thank you, Can't wait for the sequel! My favorite character was Bill.
| Lajoci 1/13/13 . chapter 25
Wonderful story! The character development and additions to the Wagon Train family has been a great read. While it was sad to read of Major Adam's death, it was a lovely end.
Will be happy to read new adventures. Thank you.
| IMSLES 1/13/13 . chapter 25
Aw, how sad at their loss, but no finer place to have an eternal resting spot.
I love how you made arrangements for the family to stay together every year.
I look forward to more adventures on the ranch.
| wandamarie 1/12/13 . chapter 25
wow it was a great story thanks keep up the great work
| Miss MaryAnn 1/12/13 . chapter 25
That was a very satisfying ending of your story but I wish Seth Adams hadn't died. I am looking forward to your next story.
| valerie from france 1/12/13 . chapter 25
Like a good movie, when we love a story, we never want it to end. it was a real pleasure even with the death of a character. well, even for a sad way, the words are beautiful. many thanks.
I'm really waiting for the new story of McCullough's...
| ullswater 1/12/13 . chapter 25
Thank you for writing this story, I have enjoyed reading it, the end is a bit abrupt in my opinion but that's not a critisim as it's your story and you tell it how you want to. Sad to be saying goodbye to Mr Adams though!
| dippycippy 1/12/13 . chapter 25
Ty was beautiful and I can't wait for the next story. Hope it's soon
| Jasper's Mom 1/12/13 . chapter 25
Very nice. I knew it had to end sometime but I love the story and didn't want it to end. I'm so happy you plan to do a sequel. I see much potential for a long story about new settlers in a new territory. The boys getting a new baby is great. Let's give Flint and Mary a break and make it a girl! :)