I love it! Tifa is my most favorite FF character ever, I thought you portrayed her perfectly! Though I mainly like to read SephirothxTifa fics, I thought this Tifa fic was good. You should make more! ^_^

*Gasp* How could Tifa be so selfish! Actually let Aeris die? Aeris is my fav! That was so good! Bou very sad! I just wanted to kill Tifa and Sephiroth at that point!

Wow, well written. You seemed to take up the emotions just right. I can't help but think that Tifa would be a little more concerned, but it doesn't matter to much, cuz you made up for it with things wonderfully written story. Keep it up!

Now this is what I'm talking about. You should work more on first person or angst, they seem to suit you much better. I hope to see much more of this kinda stuff from you.

wow accutally that was really really good! ^_~ and i dont wanna say this, but, i think that tifa and aeris were really really good friends...and i dont think she wanted her to die. but this is good, makes me think, jealousy can make you think...weird things..lol...but i wonder did tifa ever really love cloud? she always called him a jerk and stupid and messed up...but, nevertheless, this is one of the best stories ive read in a long time. keep up the keep work! ^_~