Perfect! This is exactly the way it happened after that episode, I'm sure of it. Nicely done.

Really nice expansion of what we see in the episode. Saul/Carrie is my favourite part of the show. Best father-daughter type relationship on TV, IMO.

I love the way you've captured the sweetness of the Saul/Carrie relationship. I find it more intriguing than her relationship with Brody, to be honest!

I love this! Is it strange that I'm starting to ship Saul/Carrie? In any case, I love the tone of your fic, it strikes just the right note and it's so sweet how worried Saul is for her.