Good stuff I liked it!

Awesome fic! Very well written. I takes me back to when I was a teen and just sitting in the same chair with my bf would make me blush!

That was really really cute. I really really liked it! I have such trouble finding Squinoa fics this cute! ^_^ write more!

Haha, just now finished Chapter 2. The story got very... interesting... hmm... ok whatever, the story got very *ing sexy at the private pool part x_X
Lake scenes, shower scenes, pool scenes... I love the fluff moments you always include in your fanfics! Judging by their accuracy, they probably come from personal experience, eh?

Oh, and that official strategy guide comment in the first chapter got me wondering if there really WAS a map of Esthar on pg. 260, so I got up and found my copy... and lo and behold, there it was! o_O

Squall was definitely OoC, but judging by your slightly humorous intentions in making this, I would have to say that his alternate personality fits in quite well.

Great read on my part anyway ;)

Warkon you better watch your damn words, this fanfic was excellent, yet here you are being immature about your personal opinions...
I'm a guy and even I find that "PMSing" remark offensive...
Replying to fanfics is for offering some friendly critique or giving positive feedback, not being a jerk and insulting the writer who put so much thought into their story -_-

Anyway, I thought the story was very good! But, then again, I have yet to see anything wrong in your fanfics =)

The plot seems ok and your writing style isn't bad either, yet I stopped reading this fic halfway through the first chapter. Why? Because of your description of Squall (in particular of his thought process). You took one of the coolest Final Fantasy characters and turned him into a bumbling lovesick moron! What the hell were you thinking! Were you PMSing when wrote this or were you drunk! Needless to say I am never reading any of your works again.

Great fic! I've read it several times and I still smile every time I read it.
Keep Writing!

Heh... this whole story had me smiling non-stop. The interaction between Squall and rinoa was just so candid. This was some pretty cute and believable fluff too. *chuckles*

This story contains one of those "moments" when I want to give Squall a hug (in the innocent sense). But then again, I'm not going to interrupt their cuddling. ;D

you're a genius!! =D i love it!

love this story! it was wonderful!

this is a really good story! I can't wait to read more of it! Add the father-son talk dammit! I wanna picture laguna squirm with his leg-cramps...anyway, good story thus far, keep up the good work...'cuz I'll be notified of the next chapters!

Excellent story!

I really enjoyed this! Squall's thoughts were just funny yet honest. It was good to remember that he can just be a regular teenager with raging hormones, unsure of his relationship. POV was just great. I liked the pool scenes - sweet and kinky. XD Looking forward to more!

excellent story!
it would be nice to see this story in Rinoa's point of view too =)

AWW! Are you not gonna do the father-son talk? why not write a fic about it?