i like your balladeer parts because when you read them you can just hear Waylon's voice saying them your head

Nice chap I Noticed corrections again. other than that it was good.
"What did say?" what did you say?
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Bo almost fell out of the window but he caught himself. The girls giggled even louder.

"Would you stop?" Daisy made a acid comment toward Bo's womanizing antics. "And help me get these into the bed. This is supposed to be your job."

"She's right." Bo said, turning to Luke, peering inside at him. "We shouldn't let a pretty young lady handle all the hard work, let alone our cousin."- posted twice
and close to the end you posted Vance instead of Vince. other wise good chap. I liked it.

update soon!

Like it update soon!

YaY! my fave chapter i love Coy and Vance.

great! update soon