Coooooooooool that waz asome plz make ch 15 soon plzzzzzzzzzzz

Great story it's amazing hurry up and write the next chapter. And this better be a tskune/kurumu story because I'm gonna hate you if you just put moka in and make it a tskune/moka. So yeah. Great story but I kinda wish tskune was stronger I mean he couldn't even beat that karate dude I forgot his name you know the dude that is with sun. Hopefully you might make him stronger

Make Tsukune and Kurumu go back in time and stop the event

You should have tsukune and kurumu go back in time, and stop the event that happened that day.

I loved it, was Moka's part a flashback or was she hiding.
Hope tsukune and Kurumu meet Mizore's mom.

Love the story, it sends you on one hell of a emotional rollercoaster like a great tragedy should.
There are the occasional spelling or grammer mistake, but they don't detract from the intenseness of a perfectly executed story.
I am definately waiting in anticipation for the next chapter.

This is amazing! More more more please more! And if you get a chance please r&r Stepping Into Hell

your story was perfectly executed
but you lack proper grammar and spelling
skills, all in all this was a great story and look
forward to a sequel

This chapter portrays a lot of emotion and the diary entries fit in, if you read all the chapters in depth which some people don't seem to do

Please don't ever do this again this dairy chapter was horrible and a waste of time.

Haha why've you gotta hurt us with that cliffhanger, a few spelling mistakes but all in all a nice chapter, and I wonder if Tsukune's parents will find out or not and what their reaction'll be. Good work and thanks for writing even if you have a job and school :D

Is Tsukune dead or not because I remember his dream of Kurumu and their child alone.

Is the ghoul gonna get to play?

This is a great story. Very original and beautiful. Looking forward to the next chapters!

hey just found this story its awesome please update soon