This was amazing You truly captured ho everyone felt in meeting Solaire

First I need to say PRAISE the SUN!

Good chapter, and of course he stays behind to look at the sun.

Hey man! this was pretty good! You probably noticed the spelling errors ( I sure did) So those can go without mention, but the line "with a look of (Dran suspected) of love and longing" is kinda weird? For instance, it has two "of"s. Maybe a slight re-phrase to something like " He looked at the sun with a look of love and longing, or at least Dran suspected" or somesuch BUT Anyway, this was good! Yatta!