|Reviews for Entwined Encounters|
| Wqeu 1/3/13 . chapter 1
This was amazing You truly captured ho everyone felt in meeting Solaire
| Dantalion 10/2/12 . chapter 1
First I need to say PRAISE the SUN!
Good chapter, and of course he stays behind to look at the sun.
| Bro 9/19/12 . chapter 1
Hey man! this was pretty good! You probably noticed the spelling errors ( I sure did) So those can go without mention, but the line "with a look of (Dran suspected) of love and longing" is kinda weird? For instance, it has two "of"s. Maybe a slight re-phrase to something like " He looked at the sun with a look of love and longing, or at least Dran suspected" or somesuch BUT Anyway, this was good! Yatta!