I feel so bad for Veronica forst her mom leaves and she has to deal with all of those emotions and then her dad is shot and she has to deal with that but it is good that Logan and Lilly are there for support and to help her even though they aren't getting along. I can't wait for the next chapter

Interesting twist in the VM story line. I enjoy stories with Lilly alive and a very young LoVe. Carry on...

Interesting twist. Cannot wait to see where you take this story.

I feel so bad for Veronica when her mom left I think that her mom is a coward for just leaving and not saying anything or trying to get help first. I am happy that Lilly and Logan worked together to make Veronica feel better even though they don't get along.

Looking forward to more :-)

Interesting start. Like the easy relationship between LoVe. I see a lot of potential directions you can go with this story. Can't wait to see which way you decide to go.

Haha Logan falling over bins, funny. I like that even though Duncan is giving Veronica the 'cold-shoulder' and Lilly is giving the 'cold-shoulder' to Logan. Veronica and Logan are still friends.

I like this story and how Logan and Veronica act around each other and espeically since Lilly noticed and wants the real Veronica to come out of her shell

love to read more