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Guest 9/28/12 . chapter 1 A silly story? Not really. I enjoyed reading it, even though it was written 'in haste'. Perhaps you could edit and expand the story? How about filling out the events? Might make it more interesting. However, I must say that none of the three Champs would ever marry, as their careers come first. If they are attracted to someone, they would really only have time for a short fling. But, I guess a short fling is better than nothing at all. Thanks for the read. SharonClaire. |
SiameseLady2012 9/28/12 . chapter 1Silly story? Not really. It was an enjoyable read. To be honest, I doubt if the 3 Champions would ever marry. Their careers come first. There is always danger of retaliation if the criminal element found out about the new wife/husband. This would be their weakness and it cannot be allowed to happen. Keep up with the writing. Why not enhance this story? Fill out the events - make them more interesting. Then perhaps it will become a 'novel'. Looking forward to more stories... |