Yay! Training scores! Yay for Maya for getting a 10! I'm really liking the idea of her and Clay splitting up from the careers together. I really like both of these tribute pov's; they both seem like really smart tributes who will do well in the games. I am literally so excited for the games to start and to read about how all the tributes are going to use their powers! I'm also really excited for the interviews, I love Caesar Flickerman! Can't wait for the next update, hopefully it will be soon, but if it's not that's ok because I know school's the worst, I just started back on Monday too, I hate going back after a really long break! hahah

So this chapter focused on the scores, and I wasn't able to get much of either tribute's personality, but there was enough to go by.

Naomi has strong motivation, and she's observant. Even while looking at the other tributes' scores she only thinks of how much of a threat to her own survival. Helpful but not really emotional. Anyway I'll be interested to see how she does.

Edgar is really intelligent and able to infer lots of information by the scores. He seems like a nice guy but I got that from Alkyone's POV earlier in the story. He's pretty meh, nothing special.

Happy writing!

Great chapter! Both POV's were nice. Can't wait for the games!

Great chapter! Oooh, Edgar was in it. I love how you wrote him. I like Naomi too, she seems like quite a tough cookie. Please update soon!

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Very nice! LOVED the chapter :D Happy new year and yeah, school is a bother -_-

good chapter, can't wait for more! great that we're getting closer to the games, and i'm happy that aria at least got an average score. i hope that she can do well in the arena!

It was short, but good! Poor boy, Falcon sounds like a nice bloke but I'm pretty sure he will end up dying sooner or later. I don't have a real opinion about Alkyone yet, but I suppose he's all right.
Anyway, great chapter, please update soon!

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Great chapter. Glad to see you posting again. I loved Alkyone's spot. Keep it up.

Only three more chapters until the Games? 0.o I'm so excited!

Alkyone strikes me as more of District Three than District Six, and Edgar too. I didn't actually get that much about her personality in this chapter, I heard more about Edgar's observations and Alky's actions. She's suspiciously skilled for an outer-district tribute, but seeing her brother die might have prepared her better for fighting. Maybe combat runs in the family?

Falcon, Dom, and Cyan as allies (possibly?), wow. This kid's got some serious courage if he's willing to brave Cyan's insanity. If the girl dies, Falcon and Dom will be a pretty powerful alliance. His power will definitely help him, so I'm eager to see where he goes. He's not optimistic, but he could be strong enough to pull through for a while.

Happy writing!

Yay! A new chapter! Loved it by the way! Alkyone is an ok tribute for me. As of right now, she isn't one of the tributes that I'd be so upset over if they were to die in the games, but who knows, that could all change. I really like Falcon and his power, I think it'll definitely help him in the arena. Sorry that writer's block sucks so much. :D I'm excited for the next chapter, interviews right?

YAY! Another chapter! I was starting to get worried to gave up on these games :) Loved the chapter and can't wait for more.

FINALLY! So glad you updated :) can't wait for the games!

Great chapter! Falcon and Alkyone don't really stand out to me that much, though Falcon's power is quite cool and Edgar seems like an interesting character :) Yay only three more chapters til the games! *happy dances* I can't wait!

great chapter! excited for more updates, and i hope that i can see ada in action soon!

YesI should probobly log in, but I forgot my email. Don't ask how XD
Anyway, I quite like Garrett, he seems like the most sane of the careers, though you know I like my psychopaths :) It would be good if he made friends with Phoenix though, that might bring out her kinder side a bit ij the games.
As for Cyan, perfect. I just adore insane characters, and Cyan is just so haunting! Her training session was great, though I don't know why they let her do it. I guess Callie is pretty sadistic :) would you mind maybd writing a district two POV soon? It feels like ages since we heard from them :)