That seems like a very Johnny thing to do, but at the same time not...
Either way, it was good.)

Ouch! That was cruel and probably rather difficult. It was be careful what you wish for in its most deliciously agonizing, ironic form, and I read it more than once in a minute.

That was... beautiful. Just loved every line of it. The ending actually made me pause and think for a moment and that is always the sing of a good piece of writing, the ones that make the reader feel something. Great job XD

Oh wow. That was just epic. I love how it ended, how very fitting it was. Great job.

That was very beautiful.

Wow, that's amazing. I like it.