|Reviews for Happily Ever After?|
| NewfieLady 12/9/12 . chapter 1
| ladybugsmomma 12/8/12 . chapter 3
Skinner is good about saving them. Keep up the great work!
| phnxgrl 12/8/12 . chapter 3
Interesting chapter. I loved how their old boss was keeping tabs on them. Please continue.
| RhizOneill 11/19/12 . chapter 2
| ladybugsmomma 11/15/12 . chapter 2
Knowing them, they will eventually make a stand to fight. Great chapter! Keep up the great work!
| phnxgrl 11/15/12 . chapter 2
Great Chapter Mulder and Scully plus their kids on the run. Please continue.
| ladybugsmomma 9/22/12 . chapter 1
Great start! I hope to read more!
| Vadergirl2006 9/21/12 . chapter 1
omg omg i love it so far!
| so kiss me goodbye 9/19/12 . chapter 1
Sounds like someone doesn't want our FBI heroes to live in domestic bliss - it's always fun to see the inventive things writers can come up with to upset life for Mulder and Scully. :) Would love to see what you've got planned.
One suggestion? I commonly read the recommendation to start every new speaker on a new paragraph. There might be other reasons for it, but the main one (I think) is to make things easier to read. I always reckon the easier something is to read, the more people you get reading your stories. (- not a fact as far as I know :D just a hunch)
Good luck with the rest of your story.