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| Reviews for Happily Ever After? |
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   NewfieLady 12/9/12 . chapter 1Great story |
| ladybugsmomma 12/8/12 . chapter 3 Skinner is good about saving them. Keep up the great work! |
| phnxgrl 12/8/12 . chapter 3 Interesting chapter. I loved how their old boss was keeping tabs on them. Please continue. |
| RhizOneill 11/19/12 . chapter 2 Great chapter! |
| ladybugsmomma 11/15/12 . chapter 2 Knowing them, they will eventually make a stand to fight. Great chapter! Keep up the great work! |
| phnxgrl 11/15/12 . chapter 2 Great Chapter Mulder and Scully plus their kids on the run. Please continue. |
| ladybugsmomma 9/22/12 . chapter 1 Great start! I hope to read more! |
| Vadergirl2006 9/21/12 . chapter 1 omg omg i love it so far! |
| so kiss me goodbye 9/19/12 . chapter 1 Hi Sounds like someone doesn't want our FBI heroes to live in domestic bliss - it's always fun to see the inventive things writers can come up with to upset life for Mulder and Scully. :) Would love to see what you've got planned. One suggestion? I commonly read the recommendation to start every new speaker on a new paragraph. There might be other reasons for it, but the main one (I think) is to make things easier to read. I always reckon the easier something is to read, the more people you get reading your stories. (- not a fact as far as I know :D just a hunch) Good luck with the rest of your story. |
