As I read this, I was wondering how a broom, and other inaminate objects was going to tie into the story. How, or rather, why this objects were Important. I love how you made all the objects children. It is a fun way to spin a story.

Great job,
ArtemisPrim

aurther's gone nuts -.-"

I almost cried at the end! Thank you, my favorite part was when Arthur declared his unconditional love for Merlin, be she male or not, well, *sob it was just so beautiful!

It's fun it get in a bathing suit or old clothes and go shower in the rain with shampoo and stuff.

I talk to inanimate objects all the time. Like my pillow and the sink and the dishwasher.

hi

i just wanted to say that this chapter made me laugh sooooo much. Especially with merlin dancing in the rain. It just seems like something she would definitely do.

Thanks :)

This was a great story. I wish you luck with all your future works.

Absolutely fantastic story! Loved it. :)

great chapter and story sad to see it being over loved the story though. Great job

I'm almost crying. I didn't want it to end! But all good things must come to an end I suppose. Great story, great ending. I'll be looking out for anything else you may write in the future. xoxo

Fabulous.

I love it! I think it's fitting that each child be given whatever held their souls. It's like...the completion of a circle.

That was amazing.

Seriously. I loved every bit of it. I've spent the whole day just reading this story (apart from eating. Of course.) and I just found it... Amazing.

Well done.

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Lovely story mate! I found it fun to read and an interesting perspective on the life of a female Merlin.

sooooooo cute 3 3 3