|Reviews for Welcome to Our Underworld|
| BlackTearAngel 3/10/13 . chapter 2
| Anye 12/16/12 . chapter 2
I had fun reading your start-up chapters of the story! I love mythology and the Title "Underworld" with Reborn's thought about Hades is fascinating! I am very curious what you have planned. The first chapter I had to read again to couple who i think the Arcoboleno characters are. Reborn in adult form is the "knight", the warrior probably Colonello. And Mamon was probably the one the ropes "held" like he'd float away. Though I'm not too sure, maybe that was Skull. Aw, Tsuna's and Reborn's first meeting was great! Typically like a child would think. Or at least those not totally caught-up in their own importance. Children see more than you give them credit for!
I really hope to read more again soon. That Winston quote is a bit tongue-in-cheek isn't it? Are you saying not to expect updates anytime soon? oh come on, pleeeaasse? :D Been a month already I see haha! So just in case you don't manage to post before Christmas, Merry Christmas!
| Ayz283 12/4/12 . chapter 2
Dude. I love their first conversation. It's sooo.. I don't have a word for it. But great chapter! Interesting story! Looking forward to reading more of it! :DD
| Aditi Aglaia 11/18/12 . chapter 1
Alright. After being hit over the head by my lovely sister, she convinced me to reread this chapter. And it Pains me to admit it...but FINE. I agree with her (damn that hurts). I am still not Entirely convinced about her suspicion of the Fallen, all things considered, however it does have merit.
And damn, even though you threw me in the deep end I have to give credit where credit is due. You write marvelously. Please don't stop. Every chapter will most likely build on the next. You know, I'm thankful that I only started reading BBBaB, unknowingly, when you were done with it. I'm sort considering hitting my head on the desk for not waiting for you to be underway at least five more chapter with this one. I can be a glutton when I find great writing and an interesting story.
Maybe your weekend was fulfilling and great. Hopefully you can grace this reader with another installment when you are satisfied with it. Have a fun week!
| MissSexyRain 11/14/12 . chapter 2
Well this was kind of strange. I don't know how Reborn his feeling or Tsuna...
| calypso tchaka 11/13/12 . chapter 2
Very interesting. You made me very curious to find out what you have planned for this story. Hopefully we'll get to see the next chapter soon. I found little Tsuna's thoughts very entertaining. He is very perceptive for that age. One sometimes underestimate children. Every now and then there's one that will surprise you.
Wonder if that baby will follow him home eventually? Hope you have a great day and enjoy the rest of the week! cheers x
| calypso tchaka 11/13/12 . chapter 1
Well, I think I've got a sort-of-clue (if previous reviewers and their confusion permit). This last part made me think specifically of something, or someone, that must have Fallen. Really curious what you have planned for this story. On to the next chapter!
| Aditi Aglaia 11/13/12 . chapter 2
I'll be honest. The first chapter was difficult to compute. I was submerged up to my eyebrows in a swamp of confusion. No Clue... Nada. Nothing. Zilch. (what did you smoke?)
So, deciding that I need more chapters about this very perplexing beginning, I can only say this: I am so glad to finally read more! I am still extremely confused. Coupled with the summary, I'm undecided whether they are vampires, cursed warlocks, the usual mafia, UMA's, or Something Else. I mean seriously, throw me a bone! I desire a clue! (Hahaha Who-dunnit)
Anyway, I'd love to read more and get some road signs for this weirdly wonderful start of the journey. I'd Love to read more. Hopefully you can post another ASAP...within say...two hours. Need more time? Alright, let's make it five hours. (Thought I'd say 30 minutes, didn't 'cha?)
Thanks for the chapter!
| Bleach-ed-Na-tsu 11/12/12 . chapter 2
How...wonderfully dark. I must admit, I enjoy your writting style, so mature and easy to read. There is such personality in your characters! It's all so very unique and amazing!
Keep up the good work! I look forward to more.
| astrakage 11/12/12 . chapter 2
The end part was so funny!
| MissSexyRain 10/22/12 . chapter 1
I only have a vague idea of what's going on, but I'm interested :)
| Ayz283 10/8/12 . chapter 1
Oh wow... that was interesting though a tad bit confusing but it's nice so far. Hope to read more of it :DD
| juz-a-reviewer 10/2/12 . chapter 1
This fic has promise. It is so dark but so well written. Your use of words describes each situation so accurately I literally saw decapitated heads and body parts around me when I read it. I had to school my face to a more controlled mask so the people around me do not think I smelt something bad. I look forward to its development. And I have become a fan of yours. You weave your stories so well that the plot flows seamlessly. In case you are wondering why I did not leave reviews for your other stories, I was so riveted by your writing I did not want to stop reading your works. Hence no time for reviews :P
I have to tell you that you are one of the best writers I have seen out there and I look forward to seeing more stories from you!
| Beauty in decay 9/27/12 . chapter 1
A little bit confusing but good so far :) You gonna continue or not? Really hope you do
| Final Syai Lunar Generation 9/20/12 . chapter 1
Gah! _ this was awesome but also confusing. 3 but I get it. So I'm guessing it was Reborn the whole time. Lol he was naked xD. *COUGH* anyways I didn't know Reborn hard sharp claws :O lol was he a demon? XD. And their speech :/ I'm guessing they were in the old times were you use old speech :/. And that man surrounded by dead ppl :D that was Reborn too! *points dramatically* I'm so smart and the. For some reason he comes out as a naked baby xD. Lol :3 awesome. I wonder if the next chappie is Tsuna or whatever :p I'll love it either way :3
Keep up the good work and can't wait to see how the plot will develop! :3 I hope your a dedicated author :3