|Reviews for The First Bite|
| Silver E. Sparrow 12/7/12 . chapter 1
I think I'll just be re-reading all your stories. Yep that's what I will be doing :P. Swoony, swoony story this was xD. I loved Emma's reaction to walking in on Rumbelle, hilarious. She should consider herself lucky she didn't see anything more.
| vinyl is better 11/25/12 . chapter 1
This was wonderful! Sweet in the right parts and hilarious in others. I really admire your ear for the characters' own dialogue, for things that the actors would really be saying.
I wanna hug this fic and frame it on my wall.
| boop-oop-ee-doo 10/25/12 . chapter 1
| white raven 10/24/12 . chapter 1
"Very willing," she assures her and Emma shudders "I'm Belle."
That's a pitch-perfect line.
Another lovely little short. You capture the magic between these two very well.
| goldmin 10/21/12 . chapter 1
"I spend years painstakingly arranging their love life and they cannot grant me ten bloody minutes to enjoy mine" This has got to be the single best line I have read in all of Rumbelle fan fiction! Every so often I have to re-read your story just for this line. Beautiful job!
| Magnolie 10/10/12 . chapter 1
I love the moment where the Charmings come in - it's just so Emma xD
Nice Job ;) !
| madsthenerdygirl 10/9/12 . chapter 1
Was that a Firefly reference in the "special Hell" sentence? Or am I just seeing too much into things? In any case I loved this. Rather like the one you wrote about constantly being interrupted... heh heh. And you gotta love Emma's lack of tact.
| Guest 9/25/12 . chapter 1
wow both tastefull and funny,a good story,could do w/out the swearing,great story none the less.
| Cande 9/24/12 . chapter 1
This is amazing and I love you. Ugh I really want the episode to go exactly like this.
| dixiedelight270 9/23/12 . chapter 1
Omg! You have to continue this! It's amazing!
| Usio-Amamiya 9/21/12 . chapter 1
so sexy and funny
| wintersmith 9/21/12 . chapter 1
So we now know Emma's Operation Cobra code name: Moodkiller. (Henry: "I don't get it." Emma: "Don't ask.") I loved how Belle pounced on Gold. And Charming's amused reaction ("High five, bro! Your 'one brief flicker of light', I presume?") This could be the first part of a trilogy: First Bite, First Night (In Which They Make Up For Lost Time), and First Light (the morning after, because obviously they cannot make up for centuries of separation in one night!).
| yunadustrial.twifan 9/21/12 . chapter 1
this was awesome.
| Guest 9/20/12 . chapter 1
OMG SO GOOD. Phew. Aw. Whoo. I so wish the episode will go that way. That was an AWESOME story.
Phew. Sorry, still flustered. XD
I can't wait for the Rumbelle!
| Aiisling 9/20/12 . chapter 1
I love the idea of the Charmings, Belle and Rumple, sitting awkwardly in the pawn shop while it storms like mad outside. I can see the screen shot now!