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| Reviews for Please, Don't Wait in the Car |
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   MeriSalope 10/18/12 . chapter 1well done! congrats on the first story, please continue to share |
| smkfan14evr 9/24/12 . chapter 1 awe, so sweet! great job! |
| Guest 9/22/12 . chapter 1 I really liked this story. It was very sweet. Please keep writing! |
| Guest 9/22/12 . chapter 1 Awesome story! I love it! You captured the character's personalties so well! Love to read more from you! |
| Mandlee123 9/21/12 . chapter 1 Bravo! Thjs was a terrific first try; I want seconds! |
| Loretta 9/21/12 . chapter 1 Liked the story very much |
| WasWoksa 9/20/12 . chapter 1 That was awesome. I enjoyed the opening hook. Had to keep reading to find out where that was going. I didn't know where in the history we were going to land, so that was a fun little trip. Personally, I like where you have them a few years down the road, and I would put them in a very similar place...which you'll see if I ever get my own story finished! |
| Marsha 9/20/12 . chapter 1 Loved it. Really like to see new stories. Thanks. |
| cyndergator 9/20/12 . chapter 1 Grest job, Love the title too :) |
| Erika 9/20/12 . chapter 1 Very nice - I always get a little sad at stories where they leave the field so I really enjoyed the ending. |
