you should continue it one of my top 5 favs on fan fic. its number2 love it please contine if you dont i would just die!

Man i was happy that there was going to be a new ch but i gest not.. I love the story as it it but if u want to star all gen go for it i will stell read it ...

Continue it but rewrite the beginning as well.

I was very excited when I got an email to say that this has been updated. I literally bounce up and down because I love this story. I was mildly disappointed to find that it wasn't a proper chapter. But as a writer myself I completely understand why it's not.
I think you should leave it how it is. It's actually really good and you should just continue it

Amazing I loved this episode so much, can't wait to read the next one asap :P I love that sonny and chad are so cute with eachother I'm sorry I'm not good at reviewing but can't wait to read the next one as soon as! X

She could talk! Why didn't you let her talk! I don't think that's even medically possible. To stop talking in the middle of talking.

#5) This was fucking great! I loved the story!
dose not cuz it at all it stole my hart ...
plz wright soon

This is a really good story, and the plot is amazing. The only problem i have is spelling and grammar, I can't help it but it drives me crazy. Might i suggest you to get a Beta? No not a Beta fish(Although i bet you know what i mean), I can't help but thing of a fish every time i read and say Beta. But I really do think it will help your writing.

2.5. Enough said. I do not like sad endings. Are you sure English is not your second language? Writer's are amazing people who can write without making a single mistake. I am not saying II am a writer. I sometimes forget how to write simple words. Completely blank sometimes. But your mistakes are still a bit out of hand and they make it really difficult to read. I skipped a few parts because I could clearly not understand some sentences. Sonny speaking will make the story enjoyable and Robert could never do that. Just saying.

4 but still love it and plz update asap

Omg the part at the end when Robert starts talking like he would his old wife, just made me cry for the rest of the story. :'( 5! An absolute 5! Bravo I say! Bravo! :'D Update in the next couple weeks please? Thanks! :')

5

I love your story, it is amazing

No offence or anything, but you're lying about being an American. What's your grade in English? Is English your first language?
You've greatly improved in this, I must admit. But seeing your first chapter, it's a bit hard to believe. Anyway, keep up the improvement. Might even make you Demi's favourite writer.

the chapter was great and I liked that chad stod up for sonny,I just hope that you will make it that sonny will start to speak,please that would be great...I would love this story even more..and update can'twait..