|Reviews for The Secrets of the Time Gate: The Beginning Conflict|
| sarah.thompson.5245 11/30/12 . chapter 2
Dude. You're, like, really good at writing ._.
I bet you can guess who this is!
Your grammar is as good as mine is. Which is rare. Especially on sites like this.
But yeah, here's my video thing:
| Jac Bandit 11/9/12 . chapter 12
If I was Joe, I'd be pissed that someone is using my gun! DX
Oh...Jen's in a deep trouble now...or is she finally in good hands?
| Jac Bandit 11/2/12 . chapter 11
Poor Janice...wait. So...is she dead or undead?
| Jac Bandit 10/22/12 . chapter 10
Wow. I like what you did with Devon's backstory.
OMG, the Janitor Class! XD
| Jac Bandit 10/11/12 . chapter 9
Damn...Fish People don't play around. O.O
| Kaite1211 10/10/12 . chapter 7
For all of you who have met Amy Walker, I am actually the one who created her *wink*
| LucidiaNinja 10/9/12 . chapter 8
Hey Lucidia, I mean me. I will attempt putting up the next chapter in the next couple of days, something occured. If you want to know what I think I am going to try, it is that I might have to include another character. So please, leave me an idea for another character
| Jac Bandit 10/8/12 . chapter 8
Devon has become 50% more awesome. XD
Oh shit! Run!
| Jac Bandit 10/6/12 . chapter 7
Amy is scary as hell!
| Epic Jac 10/3/12 . chapter 6
I'm reading this at school. :P LOL. Nice chapter! That poor pirate may never recover from the 2nd degree burn on his crotch, though.
| Jac Bandit 10/3/12 . chapter 6
My review didn't go through! DX Anyway, I hope Jenna eventually reads that book. And I hope that pirate's crotch recovers.
| Jac Bandit 10/1/12 . chapter 5
Vacuum FTW! XD
| Jac Bandit 9/26/12 . chapter 3
Yay! You used the Lucky Bandit Design! XD Devon's personality matches perfectly!
| Jac Bandit 9/25/12 . chapter 2
LOL, I'm sure Captain Hook is enjoying himself.
| Jac Bandit 9/25/12 . chapter 1
I'm sure you'll get in trouble for this, but what the heck! I'll bite!
Hero Name: Lucky Bandit
Male Appearance: The male has short spiky black hair, purple eyes, and a light skin tone. He wears a gold color tuxedo with matching shoes and tie. He also has a rabbit's foot tied around his neck and a small slot machine on his back.
Female Appearance: She wears a gold color jump suit with a pair of bunny ears as a hat and matching heels. She has a rabbit foot key chain hanging from a black belt and a small slot machine on her back.
Description: The Lucky Bandit is a Hero that relies purely on luck and chance. They love to trick and fool enemies as appose to rushing in with power. You'd think by now the Lucky Bandit would run out of luck.
AS-Trinket Skill, Dice Toss: Roll a Die in the air. The bigger the number it lands, the more damage it causes when it falls on your foe.
SD-Weapon Skill, Jackpot: A slot machine comes above you and if you win, gold coins shoot out as projectiles. If you lose, you take damage as it explodes.
ASD-Armor Skill, Lucky Boost: Either become fast enough to zip around the stage or strong enough to knock down your foes with a simple hit.
AD-Helm Skill, Rabbit Kick: Kick your foe back with a powerful kick.