I finally got around to reading Childe Morgan today and it inspired me to look for Deryni fanfiction. There are fifteen stories in this section! I'm glad yours is one them; it's a little rough but I've always liked Morgan and Derry's friendship, so thanks for writing it, even if it was almost eight years ago!

I think thatyou should actually read the books, because Derry actually does break down a little under the torture. Here is a line that if you want to make another one of these stories that you could use. Wencit- "Come now Derry, lets not be coy. You and Morgan are, how shall I put it, lovers. You share his bed as well as his powers." You story was alright, but you should know more about the story if you are going to write a fanfiction about it.