That story was amazing, very emotional too. There wasn't anything bad about it. I'm exited looking forward to the sequel, (if there is one) I bet it's gonna be great. :)

You should definently make a sequal to this story you should add more fluttershy and vinyl scratch

Well i think you should make a fanfic about fluttershy and you should have more combat and a little bit more drama

I'm going to use the royal canterlot voice to say this.
*deep breath* "THERE BETTER BE A SEQUEL TO THIS FAIR LONESTAR, WE COMMAND YOU"

Awesome fic bro I can't wait to hear what comes next.

I have an idea:

Lonestar encounters some strange occurance in The Everfree Forest. He checks it out with Applejack and finds out that it's actually a portal (who made it, that's up to you to make up). They suddenly get pulled in and end up in Equestria again but now it's set in the past (when The Mane Six were still fillies). While they're trying to find a way back, Applejack has to be careful of her past friends and her past self or else she would cause a time paradox. Elsewhere, a pony in black clothing is still thinking of it's master plan.

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Ukarin accent

I don't have any ideas at the time, but i will try to come up with some :)

AppleJack "Dust thou even Hoist Brethren"

awesome story lonestar i also look up to you as an inspirational author no words can describe how good i feel

Dude that was a very awesome ending. Wow I read your stuff from the begining, every chapter gave so much emotions from begining to end I cried, I laughed and beamed with pride how things turned out in the end I say to you excellent job and bravisimo for your efforts.

Awesome! Greatest story yet

Great story! You are a true artist, I would love a sequel. I have a few ideas for it but I would like to tell you "privately"

This better not be your only story or I'm gonna be mad. WRITE MORE STORIES. /)

It's clear to me that the epilogue about to come will have Lonestar and Applejack married... Just a wild guess ;).

Wow just wow now it ends with an epilogue. Man there in the begining and your writing and plot is so awesome so many ideas excellent job on this chapter bravo.