Addilyn seems sort of like a Becky Sproles before Becky Sproles, with the exception that she would end up with Tim. I think this story wants to be something bigger. And what exactly did Tim see that made him think of Addilynn as "God's most awesome creation"? I would want to see him and Addilynn discovering each other, maybe even having some misunderstandings on the way to understanding.

Is this an AU story? 'Cause in the show Mindy's mom name is Angela, not Serena. Anyway, the start is nice, I'll look forward to what will happen next.