dear April,
Thank you for reviewing and also it's RATED T FOR A REASON. If you don't get what it's about plleaaase tell me. Thank you.

not getting it...and watch your language there, Princess.

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Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what happens to Moon.

Aawwwww... Teehee, you mentioned me in A/N. Good chapter, too! Call me!

DEAR Atlantis rose First off I do not. appreciate haters.I understand that not everyone will like this you didn't have to say I don't write 's an offense on 's against unless your an idiot you should be able to how would you like it if someone says youvwrite awful and is bullying you?So I want you to think before you say something because some words can really hurt people and some lift them before you what you said made you look like a jerk.

It's very confusing. And when I say that I don't mean it's because you don't reveal much, it's because you don't write it very well. It's hard to read. It's a good plot though.

Whoa, great first chapter! First of all, I loved your rich setting and character descriptions. I also liked how you captivated the reader from the beginning. Great sentence structure, your flow is smooth and enjoyable. Great work!

Update. Again. Right now. Like it? No. Love.