Great ending I love it :) Now I saw chapter 10 is under chapret 9 on the same page :)

Great story! By the way did you update to 10th chapter? I can see on the main page there is 10 chapters but when I go into the story there is 9 only.

It better be smooth sailing.

Oooh I can't wait for the next one. Argh! This is gooooood. :))

Sometimes I wonder at the creator of Harry Ryan. Whoever did make him up gave us lots of fun stuff to play with. The story just keeps getting better. Can't wait to find out what happens.

Argh! I kinda don't want it to end. Go ahead. Post the next one please and quickly. :)

I have a feeling it has something to do with stevie, only problem is that harry is not one to be trusted... So where will you go from here?

I told you. The man is up to something

Do I want to know what Harry is up to? I love how Alex goes to find his brother. Totally awesome.

I love the story! :)

What's the dealio? What's harrys game? In stevies words I don't trust him as far as I could kick him.

I was going to get cross because you've uploaded too many today. I have so much to during the day, it takes time to read you know... But the chapter was so good.
I like Jodi and Kate teasing. Can we have more of that please!

You're getting good at these cliff hangers. Keep it up. :)

Okay... And next chapter. Hehehe

Please continue! Great story line :)