teehee- the plot thickens- I think you are doing a good job with this fic so far- please continue it soon- hope we get some "close encounters" while they are in England

I love this story. Update soon

I was so excited to see that this story had been updated! This was a wonderful chapter, even though I definitely wished that it had been longer. I can't wait to see where you take this story. It will be interesting, indeed! Please update soon. :D

Oh my, I really love stories like this. I certainly hope that you continue soon, because this will be an amazing story! I look forward to an update. :D

Wonderful start! The chapter was well put together and the dialogue flowed nicely. Never would have known that this was your first fanfic. Must be the N/CC inspiration :).

Definitely keep it going!

I have a very good feeling about your story so please write more. I like it so far ;)

I think this is very good so far- can't wait to see how it plays out-

Shows promise. I'm excited for more :)

Hey best friend. This is like awesome and stuff. You should like continue with it. Kbai

This is super cute. Its really good for your first, and you should definitely continue. Good job! ;D

I like the idea, and I think Niles thinking of taking Fran but knowing she was not his kind of woman was very well-thought.
Let's see how you manage the equilibrium between the love Niles and CC got going and their need to keep a façade of hate to the others, but doing what they really want while pretending... It's confuse, but I thing you got it! ;D